Feed back review

For my initial feed back given to me by peers, I took into consideration what changes need to be made for my magazine to look as best as it could. I was told that the font choice for my masthead was too girly for a grime magazine "I looks like a shampoo label" but I took that scrutiny into consideration so I changed the font and made the text much bolder and thicker. I was also told that the colours on the front cover made it hard to tell which was the 3 colour scheme. some of the feed back I got I didn't acknowledged it because I personally thought that it looked better the was it was. I was told that the layout of my contents page was too basic to change it up a bit but I decided to keep it the way it was because it looks constant and well laid out.